Monday, April 6, 2009
Eternal Feather
Sorry about the rough quality and the mid section edit (you'll see what I mean when I get there).Any way... The plot thickens and I am over using the ... thing. "What's that?" Came a voice from behind Hirono and suddenly his cell phone was taken from his hand. "Aah wait dad, there's something really important I need to do with that." "Well you can communicate with your friends after your dad has left, and that counts for dates as well!" "Dad look I know that you don't want me dating because of what happened with you and mom so you joke about to remind me, but come on, I'm in high school!" "Just when your mom got pregnant too! No buts, now help get my stuff inside, you don't want to you leave your old man stranded do you?""...Yes..." Hirono muttered under his breath, as he shouldered some more bags and trudged towards the door. Throwing the bags on the floor, Hirono made for the stove to cook dinner, usually it was a simple meal of ramen-in-a-cup, but since his dad was cooking Hirono thought he should at least make a effort. (Note: The next part includes actions that will have accord after I edit the begining, including that the girl who he "stole" her perse, actually is that he sees a guy stealing it and the guy shoots him in the shoulder. Then later when he returns the purse he finds out it was a childhood friend who he met in middle school. They become friends and inbetween Hirono and Chihiro's first date, she comes over and occaisionally cooks him dinner. I promise to revise this before Spring Break is over.)Suddenly front door burst open hitting Hirono in the shoulder."Ouch,that hurt." Hirono cried out turning towards the door. Instead he came face to face with Asa, "Asa, What are you doing!" "Here to cook you dinner again silly, we can't have you eating unhealthy every night.""Look not tonight, um...I have plans.""Oh, are you going on a date with Chihiro? Don't you too make a nice couple." "it's nothing like that! Look my dads here and well... HE doesn't approve of, how do I put this, female friends. HE may think that we are...you know...we..." "Oh... You mean were doing things behind closed doors? Tee Hee!""Not it off! Sheesh, don't you have any shame!""Oh come on, I am around a man. Can't I at least flirt with you, or you already snuggling up with Chihiro.""Thats not the point! Any way... o-oh dad, what are you doing th-there." Trying to get up off the ground Hirono felt his dad's eyes peircing into him."Why are you laying on the ground with a woman on top of you!" "She just came to cook dinner, right Asa!" "YEs, How do you do Mr. Suichimi." "Well enough with you not flashing your underwear around in that small skirt, if your here to cook dinner, then get in the kitchen and off my son. Is there any other visitors I should know about before this evenings over?" "N-no sir." "Good."
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