Problems with Silvia's story, and a couple of afternotes.

Silvia the main problem I see with your story is the switching of tenses. You have first and third and it can really throw off the reader. If I can I may go back and edit them myself. also please soon choose a title. We held a pull to help you so please get a tile soon. Same with you Howard, you didn't like dark washington so please change soon. Also can everyone please try and find a way to build are popularity,a nd ben if you dont post soon you will be axed.