Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Eternal Feather 2

Shcool the next day was awkard for Hirono. Although she had acted like everything was fine the mines were still in the field, and it took a braver man then him to cross. Chihiro on the other hand was seemingly free. Gliding about life she had experianced the best thing in the world. And in some ways Hirono felt that as well. It had been truely the first time that anyone had truely wanted him, but he did not want to risk destroying that feeling. So avoidance for a couple of days was the best thing. It would be painful now that he had experianced this feeling, malnourishing. Still though he had to do it.

When Hirono got home though his plans suddenly changed. His phone suddenly went off and the caller ID showed up as the person he want'd to avoid. "H-hello?" Hirono answered a cave of fear opening up and swallowing him. "Hey, Hey Hirono!", came the chirpy voice from the other side. "Let's go on another date." "Why, I bought you your bike". "We kissed, that means were lovers, and lovers go on dates." "PLease not now I am... um..." "don't worry, I'll even forgive you if you flip my skirt." "Nock it off! I'm not that kind of guy!" "hee -hee, your're so funny when your angry." "Fine, anyway when shall we go on this 'date'." "Let's skip school tomarrow, kay? My parents are out of town." "skipping? Are you sure that is a good idea?" "Both are grades are low, so what does it matter! I'll meet you at the fountain at the park at 3:00, do you promise...?" "Yeah I do." "Good." 'Click' the phone went dead, but Hirono's spirits soared. She wasn' mad, contrary she seemed to be the happiest she'd ever been. Suddenly the phone rang again. "Hello?" "Hello, son." "Dad!" I'm flying in tomarrow come and pick me up." "wait, why are you here!?" I'll answer your questions tomarrow, be there a 3:30. Bye."

Note: First bit undergoing serious reconstruction and modification. Deleting Hirono being picked on and supposed theft!

1 comment:

  1. Tomorrow, not tomarrow. And our, not are. Just wanted to point that out, Builder.

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